Peer Feedback on Moodboard No 1

The images above show the feedback I got from my peers after presenting my moodboard to them. Listed below are the main points they listed about my moodboard.

• The bold image with the sunglasses stood out the most.
• The grid formation was symmetrical however, the black and white image was a little odd in the grid. 
• Almost all the face shot images have a playfulness expression to them. 
• The expressions on the images draws viewers attention to them. 
• The models eyes and the splashes of colour leads the viewers eyes from place to place.

I was also told to look at creating the olden triangle within the moodboard when creating the second draft. As in my moodboard all the images were makeup based face shots, I was told to look at other images that are related to cute objects, different textures, colours, cartoons and generally more cute pictures rather face shots. Looking at my moodboard it was not very symmetrical as it was said to be. I need to work on the layout and make sure it is perfect in the second one. I now need to work on my second moodboard making sure I keep in mind all this feedback I got fro my peers and my tutor. I also need to start working on hair and make-up charts based on my word and my moodboard. This will help develop my ideas and also come up with different look and see which one of them works best with describing the word through hair and makeup.